For those of you who don't know, I'm writing a sequel to Twilight. Kinda. It has two... three... four new characters... that I can think of right now. A vampire, a werewolf, a human, and the human's best friend. But I work with the vampire and human the most. So two new MAIN characters.

ANYway, I want to publish it to a FanFic site and, as we all know, as avid readers, the plot synopsis is one of the most important things. I've already made JoJo read it after she had read most of the story, but her view was kind of biased since she's OBSESSED with the story now!! (Which I am thrilled about. I'm not complaining.)

So, my question for you: Does this blurb (not the fact that I wrote it, Tori, Mom, and Katelyn) does the BLURB make you want to read the story?

Dominic, a rebellious vampire who loves a challenge, decides to move in with the Cullens. How does this disobedient boy fit with his new family? And what happens when he decides to go behind their backs and date a lonely human girl named Connor? What will happen? Will she stay with him with him in spite of his many secrets, or will logic win against love?